Thursday, 1 October 2015

Second edition article to Farintosh Farms

A Happy Field Trip to Farintosh Farms

Write a trip report of the Farintosh Farms visit. Include pictures from Facebook. Check with a partner for any typos before posting. Then comment on your classmates' blogs.

Yesterday, It was sunny day, our classmates and teacher took a field trip to visit Farintosh Farms. This is the first time for me to visit a Canadian farm. All of us met together in TTC Don mills station and happily talked about the refresh countryside air and fresh vegetables. Farintosh Farms is located just to the north of Toronto. Only after a little more than 10 minutes’ driving time, we arrived at the farm. The farm is full of fresh air, vegetables, fruits and plants. There were different kinds of green vegetables growing in the field to pick fresh. Some classmates picked beans growing in the field. Others took pictures with beautiful scenes of trees, crops, farm machines and a dog. There was also one food market. In this market you could see squash, onions, watermelons, maple syrup, honey, etc. I bought a bottle of pure Canadian natural honey.  This three-hour trip brought us endless happiness. It was a really nice trip.


Finally, thanks very much to my classmate Mr. William Song for the car pool.

Third speech feed back

The following is my feedback from teacher, please check it. This speech is not good there is lot of problems because of the confued mind.Should be correct in the future.